Sunday, June 20, 2010
My writing
I opened the door . It was damp,dark and scary. I saw some stairs and I went up, the floorboard's were creaking as soon as I was up the stairs, the door shut behind me and I saw shadows of bats when I got close the bat's flew into my face. I heard scream's from a crow it sounded like someone was singing in a high pitch voice and they broke the window's . I saw blood on the wall then i felt a push suddenly I was in a room fulled of chainsaw's and skeleton's the chainsaw's were getting ready to attack me so I ran and I jumped out the door . Then I saw a big sign saying EXIT so I ran to the exit and I never went back there again. But my brother did OH Boy.
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Next time i can use some adjective's.
ReplyDeleteThe good thing I did well was I used punctuation.
ReplyDeleteI learn 't some interesting word's.
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